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©2008-2009 `darkmoon3636
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Small pixel robot. Critique appreciated, if you're able to do it by tomorrow morning(ish). STAY TUNED, AND IT WILL TRANSFORM INTO TRADITIONAL ART :D

That wire was supposed to lead to something but I'm deciding on whether I still want it to, so instead of taking it off completely, it now looks like a weird tail.

Ok, I'm so adding a little USB so it's a USB tail D:

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I think the USB tail looks a bit strange because it's completely straight until it reaches the ground. :shrug: Other than that, no critique from me. :B
Nice work. :D

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:iconsephy117:
This looks awesome! You're very talented with pixel art. As for critiques, I'm not sure what to say, sorry. >>;;

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I wanted to give the impression that it weighs enough to not be sloped, since I personally think it's more aesthetic, and it would otherwise intersect with the hand, which would be confusing since they're the same color.

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Ominously Onymous says (11:09 PM):
ample solution
:iconshatteredrequiem:
I like it! It's pretty good, except for it feels a little unbalanced. The body has a slight tilt backwards that doesn't feel natural. Otherwise, nice job!

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:iconabfc:
That's fair. :thumbsup:

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:icondarkmoon3636:
[link] this better or worse?

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Sweeney Todd says (11:09 PM):
DO AS THE ROMANS DO
Believe in the humble that believes in bees says (11:09 PM):
have sex with it?
Sweeney Todd says (11:09 PM):
I GUESS
Ominously Onymous says (11:09 PM):
ample solution
:icondarkmoon3636:
wait, I fixed the feet (I edited the deviation to the newest version)

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Sweeney Todd says (11:09 PM):
DO AS THE ROMANS DO
Believe in the humble that believes in bees says (11:09 PM):
have sex with it?
Sweeney Todd says (11:09 PM):
I GUESS
Ominously Onymous says (11:09 PM):
ample solution
:iconbif425:
I think it still looks like it is about to fall over backwards. Perhaps move the entire right leg over the right just a bit? Apart from that, I can't fault your work, the colours and shading are fantastic, and he is very cute! :)

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